Feedback from Progress Crit.

From my crit today, the following suggestions arose:

• Create double meaning by using datablocks: how its made, the use of gelatine, for&against
• Book with 2 different ends: look at 2 different issues
• Toothpaste: how one composites other, medicalised packaging 
• Celebrate sweets using infographics
• Informative book in datablocks: colours from packaging

Group Work Self Assessment Form.

As a group, we decided that we all contributed evenly across all aspects. A very successful project!

Presentation Feedback.

Subject Matter


Sweets


Appropriate Themes of Subject Matter within Research


Different types of sweets
History of sweets
Timeline of sweets
Ingredients
Popularity
Health
Facts, Statistics, Words, Photos


Methods to Gather Appropriate Research


Visit sweet shops
Opinions
Photos of sweets
Primary sources: books, internet


General Feedback on Presentation


Clear and concise with a range of directions to develop the project into
Wide breadth of research


Methods for Categorising Research


Cost
Colour
Size
Weight
Prize
Popularity
Time
Ingredients


Additional Research Required


More research both primary and secondary


Issues Raised


Cost of buying sweets to experiment with
Availability of certain sweets


Action to be Taken


Pick a theme to focus on
Experiment and HAVE FUN!!




This group feedback session gave me a lot of ideas for possible paths in which I could take my project and suggested ideas to me which I had not yet considered. Very helpful.

What If.

This was our final poster design we chose:

This is a mock up of our design on the building we were focusing on: